then we had to run back down then we had run in the big gate then we were finished and all of the 5 6 and 7 year old had to stay behind arataki and all the 9 10 and 11 year old girls had to stay behind harmony also the 5 6 and 7 year old didn't have to run up monument hill only the 9 10 and 11 year old had to run up monument hill
Kia ora Charlie,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have informed us about what you do at Cross Country at KWS school. Something you could think about in your writing is to put full-stops and capital letters into your writing so it makes sense and it is easier to read. A good effort Charlie.
Kia Ora charlie i love the way you thort and used a lot of efit
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Charlie I really enjoyed reading your maramataka because you used a lot of effort. The best part I liked was your thinking and knowing what to do.Next time you can try and use full stops and use capital letters and commas. Good effort though and you should put more info into it.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora charlie. My name is Taimarino. I am a year 7 student from Tautoro School. I enjoyed reading this piece of writing. Maybe next time you could get some teacher support. This reminds me of the time when we had to write a recount about our Cross Country day. Blog you later...
ReplyDeleteHi Charlie, my name is Yazmin and I’m a year five from Paihia School. It was great to hear about your Cross Country. Did you have a good time at Cross Country? Are you going to the interschool Cross Country? You could've added some punctuation. You could’ve also told us what place you came. Don’t forget to put capital letters at the start of a sentence, your title, a name of something and someone's name.
ReplyDeleteHi Charlie, my name is Samantha and I come from Paihia School and i am a year five student. Did you have a good time at Cross Country? Don’t forget to put the correct punctuation also don’t forget to put capital letters at the start of a sentence. Put capital letters on your name and other people’s names.
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